Sunday, August 2, 2009

This one is called Fluffy Amnimals?

Shiny dark eyes


and fluffed up cheeks


buck teeth


and weird squeaks


wickle whishkers


light brown fur


soft and delightfurl


nibbles most the night


and snoozeys tight


no need to fright


delicate


little life.

















Has that made you feel better?

This one is called Fluffy Amnimals?
A diseased rat??? It doesn't matter, since it's a fluffy rat. I want to hug it and nap with it.
Reply:I was picturing a mole until you said rat.





We don't have moles here, so I have never seen one.
Reply:i liked it


it would make a great poem for a kids room
Reply:Hey Dune...moles don't have eyes...see, you can learn something every day...on YA..


Yup! that really made me feel better..
Reply:Once, during heavy rain, I thought there was a lost cat on our back porch. When I opened the door, it was a 5 pound rat, the body over a foot long, 2 feet with the tail...creepiest thing I ever saw...
Reply:Yes. Finally....a positive imaged fluffin! =)


News feed: Stooge's Pheonix account just got axed bcoz of the collosum seizure hamster operation question! lol


i guess the Y!amsters are really sensitive creatures....haha!
Reply:I loved this poem moley; it really is good.I don;t like rats; but i do like moles' but your poem makes them sound so sweet i could almost like them...nice job...
Reply:I will be right back!


Gotta get a rat trap!


While reading this those little creatures started their Karate and kung fu!


They just knocked down my lamp from the post and sent my cat in flight!


all on Yapoo!!!
Reply:Oh, this is so sweet. I pictured the fluffy little animal and it was comforting. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Reply:Change the fur color to blue, and call it you.....I would definately nap with you Moley...I think Granny's about to cut me loose anyway....cududdley wuddley pome, homey!
Reply:Yaaaaay! Applause for fuzzy little critters because they are delicious they are!
Reply:nice smelly cheese


put there just to tease


round comes the arm


bent to do you harm


snapping cross your back


everything goes black
Reply:Rats are gross


But only in prose


Cute they are


In verse by far


(And ONLY in verse).


(Don't mock my rhymes I know they're amateur


Doesn't mean I can't get better).



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