Shiny dark eyes
and fluffed up cheeks
buck teeth
and weird squeaks
wickle whishkers
light brown fur
soft and delightfurl
nibbles most the night
and snoozeys tight
no need to fright
delicate
little life.
Has that made you feel better?
This one is called Fluffy Amnimals?
A diseased rat??? It doesn't matter, since it's a fluffy rat. I want to hug it and nap with it.
Reply:I was picturing a mole until you said rat.
We don't have moles here, so I have never seen one.
Reply:i liked it
it would make a great poem for a kids room
Reply:Hey Dune...moles don't have eyes...see, you can learn something every day...on YA..
Yup! that really made me feel better..
Reply:Once, during heavy rain, I thought there was a lost cat on our back porch. When I opened the door, it was a 5 pound rat, the body over a foot long, 2 feet with the tail...creepiest thing I ever saw...
Reply:Yes. Finally....a positive imaged fluffin! =)
News feed: Stooge's Pheonix account just got axed bcoz of the collosum seizure hamster operation question! lol
i guess the Y!amsters are really sensitive creatures....haha!
Reply:I loved this poem moley; it really is good.I don;t like rats; but i do like moles' but your poem makes them sound so sweet i could almost like them...nice job...
Reply:I will be right back!
Gotta get a rat trap!
While reading this those little creatures started their Karate and kung fu!
They just knocked down my lamp from the post and sent my cat in flight!
all on Yapoo!!!
Reply:Oh, this is so sweet. I pictured the fluffy little animal and it was comforting. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Reply:Change the fur color to blue, and call it you.....I would definately nap with you Moley...I think Granny's about to cut me loose anyway....cududdley wuddley pome, homey!
Reply:Yaaaaay! Applause for fuzzy little critters because they are delicious they are!
Reply:nice smelly cheese
put there just to tease
round comes the arm
bent to do you harm
snapping cross your back
everything goes black
Reply:Rats are gross
But only in prose
Cute they are
In verse by far
(And ONLY in verse).
(Don't mock my rhymes I know they're amateur
Doesn't mean I can't get better).
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