Do you like this little humorous ditty I once wrote?

Lament


Why didn't God make me pretty?


Look at the advantages it brings.


Men dive off bridges and buildings


To bring you chocolate and things.





Life is definitely easier


If you're the owner of beautiful eyes


And the world will bend over backwards


For a pair of athletic brown thighs.





Instead, I got saddled with glasses


A little moustache and buck teeth.


And men have no interest in finding


The beautiful me underneath!





(Actually, I wasn't that bad looking in my youth so this is not actually about me - it's for all those girls who get passed by in the mating game)


ps - chocolate reference is


-all because the lady loves Milk Tray

Do you like this little humorous ditty I once wrote?
You made me smile!


You wrote in a comical yet sad way. And to write piece as this one needs talent. Congratulations and welcome to yahoo! poem!


Keep writing. I'm waiting for your next one.
Reply:I love it. I think heavier woman have a heart that can love just as deeply as a slender woman.
Reply:Honestly, I dont think its all that hot. Nothing really interesting about it. Sorry.
Reply:i love it for it speaks a wealth of experience, nicely interwoven in convoluted emotions of youth... i think the poem is extremely light-hearted and i respect the poetic attempt narrating a personal insights
Reply:see this poetry fantastic but it has reality
Reply:it made me smile - especially the disclaimer at the end which wasn't part lof the poem!! Have you any more?
Reply:Very cute and funny in an "isn't-that-the-truth" kind of way.
Reply:It's good, it's got a good flow to it and rhymes easily.
Reply:i don't really like it because that is insulating me because i am beautiful and a singer.



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